tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post1455687397665187099..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: A SUMMER CHILL, CHAPTER 10Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-85803731681399628872012-10-24T08:29:18.198+01:002012-10-24T08:29:18.198+01:00Lol, Herman, don't you worry about Matthew... ...Lol, Herman, don't you worry about Matthew... he can't wait to get home to his mom. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-76474747658290339252012-10-24T03:17:03.043+01:002012-10-24T03:17:03.043+01:00"Dear God, don't let me drink more than I..."Dear God, don't let me drink more than I should"<br /><br />Ah yes, I'm well acquainted with this prayer ;-)<br /><br />But if I were a parent and my son wasn't too keen on visiting, I'd be heartbroken. But that's just me. Perhaps I just need a drink? ;-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-46955100040681045812012-10-23T16:15:13.158+01:002012-10-23T16:15:13.158+01:00Ron, the beauty of writing a story such as this is...Ron, the beauty of writing a story such as this is that I get the readers confused...smiles. Poor Brian (of Audrey fame) gets the blame for everything... lol.<br /><br /><br />Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-5762508938700449372012-10-23T15:59:38.461+01:002012-10-23T15:59:38.461+01:00The tension just mounts with each paragraph. Gues...The tension just mounts with each paragraph. Guess Brian isn't the caller...hmmmm....very intriguing!Montanagirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428565909247665015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-75636042243357815882012-10-23T15:42:21.238+01:002012-10-23T15:42:21.238+01:00Valerie, you've got me so wonderfully confused...Valerie, you've got me so wonderfully confused. When I got to the part with Audrey and Brian in the car, I thought, "Hmmm...I wonder if HE'S the caller???" But then, changed my mind.<br /><br />I like how you wrote this, by giving possibilities that it could be any number of people tormenting Audrey. <br /><br />Love the "twist" at the end of this chapter!<br /><br />Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-74122516179313229572012-10-23T11:39:35.999+01:002012-10-23T11:39:35.999+01:00Brian, I like your expression 'descent into ma...Brian, I like your expression 'descent into madness' and that's exactly what it was. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-61289484794930228812012-10-23T11:27:16.880+01:002012-10-23T11:27:16.880+01:00dang....really nice tension....you give us a littl...dang....really nice tension....you give us a little hope in the beginning with the phone call from her son, and with Brian and then the descent into madness continues with the end of the chapter...wow...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-64571412639938796552012-10-23T10:52:11.210+01:002012-10-23T10:52:11.210+01:00It gets worse, Lea. Are the different characters b...It gets worse, Lea. Are the different characters becoming familiar? <br /><br />Thank you for your comment, a movie sounds good and probably if there was one it could be quite lively :O) Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-49626144227579059442012-10-23T10:28:10.016+01:002012-10-23T10:28:10.016+01:00I must admit I was waiting for the ring at the end...I must admit I was waiting for the ring at the end of the last chapter when she was drunk. And I was waiting, too, as I read this chapter. The engagement between Audrey and Him is becoming more intense, with the appearance of many characters now and then in the story.<br /><br />Another amazing chapter, Valerie! There should definitely be A Summer Chill: The Movie :) You write so well.Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11858597624646950763noreply@blogger.com