tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post234264615310599499..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: Trust Not The Vow ... Chapter 3Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-14815339074031937782011-11-12T16:43:47.664+00:002011-11-12T16:43:47.664+00:00Kelly, thank you for your lovely comment. Chomping...Kelly, thank you for your lovely comment. Chomping at the big.... Master at dialogue .... Oooooh, I'm thrilled. Bless you, you've boosted my ego no end. Hugs.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-20033498571646347722011-11-12T14:33:33.468+00:002011-11-12T14:33:33.468+00:00You're a master at dialogue. I love how you ke...You're a master at dialogue. I love how you keep us chomping at the bit for more! You are one of my favorite storytellers, dear lady :)septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-14189206030951709902011-11-09T22:29:35.982+00:002011-11-09T22:29:35.982+00:00Durex, huh? *laughing* I won't be asking him...Durex, huh? *laughing* I won't be asking himself what that means!<br /><br />And wow for that interaction with the soon to retire....around here questions like that would end up in a law suit for harassment. *laughing* How true is that! Oh wait....maybe that's a part of the plot on how she takes over the company and becomes rich and famous! <br /><br />Gave it away, didn't I. :-/Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-91565608899917249542011-11-09T04:01:59.073+00:002011-11-09T04:01:59.073+00:00Going to play hard-to-get, eh? Well, this should ...Going to play hard-to-get, eh? Well, this should be interesting... :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-53145150238395516072011-11-08T23:00:18.262+00:002011-11-08T23:00:18.262+00:00Is there any way any male of the species is ever g...Is there any way any male of the species is ever going to understand women? :-)<br />Blimey, the word verification spells shag! Sorry no, it's shnag.john bainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15624118202659480062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-3824321827679682292011-11-08T18:22:36.890+00:002011-11-08T18:22:36.890+00:00ha you tease us in the comments as well...with wha...ha you tease us in the comments as well...with what is to come next...really well written...i do like the dialogue as it def fits authentically...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-44508954857202679782011-11-08T16:34:31.208+00:002011-11-08T16:34:31.208+00:00Ron, Eric is not all he seems at this point.
The ...Ron, Eric is not all he seems at this point. <br />The dialogue between Cynthia and Rachel is or was a typical teenage scenario. Heehee I tried to be authentic.<br /><br />Pearl, I agree,but as I commented to Ron Eric has a much bigger part to play.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-74244287232571125542011-11-08T16:01:33.740+00:002011-11-08T16:01:33.740+00:00Valerie, this story just keeps getting more and mo...Valerie, this story just keeps getting more and more intriguing!<br /><br />Love the scene between Eric and Rachel in his office...<br /><br />"‘You look charming, my dear. What's that scent you're wearing?’'<br /><br />Ooooo...what a sly dog he sounds like! <br /><br />Also, the scene between Cynthia and Rachel; talking about "It"...<br /><br />"‘He knows the Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-16797307580646202732011-11-08T15:17:20.713+00:002011-11-08T15:17:20.713+00:00Oh Mr H needs a smack in the kisser! :0Oh Mr H needs a smack in the kisser! :0Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.com