tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post2425494642489558176..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: DOUBLE-CROSSValeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-290857877499863002013-06-05T12:28:06.983+01:002013-06-05T12:28:06.983+01:00Oh, but is she upstairs dead?
THAT'S the real ...Oh, but is she upstairs dead?<br />THAT'S the real question.<br /><br />Well done!Melhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-6259827020418852262013-06-05T09:04:20.704+01:002013-06-05T09:04:20.704+01:00Hi Geraldine, thank you. I keep trying to change t...Hi Geraldine, thank you. I keep trying to change the style but am not sure if I succeed.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-39715788168783706852013-06-05T08:59:56.272+01:002013-06-05T08:59:56.272+01:00Curious, Herman... what did you expect?Curious, Herman... what did you expect?Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-91793304373705094712013-06-05T03:00:28.909+01:002013-06-05T03:00:28.909+01:00What the hey?! Wow! That was not an ending I was...What the hey?! Wow! That was not an ending I was not expecting. Way to keep me off guard :-) Heh....HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-92212120038028165222013-06-04T18:58:07.548+01:002013-06-04T18:58:07.548+01:00He's very paranoid. I don't think he's...He's very paranoid. I don't think he's thinking straight. All that anger and still doing the washing up?<br />I enjoyed this story Valerie.john bainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15624118202659480062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-54337720716755462262013-06-04T17:09:14.161+01:002013-06-04T17:09:14.161+01:00She won't see the smear because she's goin...She won't see the smear because she's going to dump the jealous, suspicious git! <br /><br />Well, maybe ...Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-69661302362304873112013-06-04T17:05:30.051+01:002013-06-04T17:05:30.051+01:00This is so well written Val. I like your style! This is so well written Val. I like your style! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-68542632340354434042013-06-04T16:10:13.922+01:002013-06-04T16:10:13.922+01:00Pearl, maybe one day I might reconsider the ending...Pearl, maybe one day I might reconsider the ending. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-64976865625593168432013-06-04T16:09:41.524+01:002013-06-04T16:09:41.524+01:00Hi Ron, thank you. At first I was unsure about the...Hi Ron, thank you. At first I was unsure about the ending but then I decided to leave it open. If I'd gone on it could have spoiled the tension. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-11692414963643231322013-06-04T15:36:53.201+01:002013-06-04T15:36:53.201+01:00You must expand this Valerie, so much more to give...You must expand this Valerie, so much more to give I think. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-23132934801584887772013-06-04T15:13:44.370+01:002013-06-04T15:13:44.370+01:00"Well, she wouldn’t see any on this knife ......"Well, she wouldn’t see any on this knife ... ever again."<br /><br />OH. MY. GOD.<br /><br />Faaaaaabulous short story, Valerie!<br /><br />I love it because it had a beginning, a middle, and a chilling ending!<br /><br />Well done, dear lady!<br /><br />Brava!<br /><br />XRonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-52539823037801020372013-06-04T14:14:37.619+01:002013-06-04T14:14:37.619+01:00Hi BC. No further, it's just a single story wi...Hi BC. No further, it's just a single story with an ending left to the imagination. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-74361102010423416162013-06-04T14:08:12.504+01:002013-06-04T14:08:12.504+01:00Hi Brian. How did you envisage the end to this tal...Hi Brian. How did you envisage the end to this tale?Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-92116949795663839302013-06-04T14:06:56.113+01:002013-06-04T14:06:56.113+01:00Oh Valerie, is this one going further or is it jus...Oh Valerie, is this one going further or is it just a snapshot? good build-up. katie eggemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00615362861509258088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-30180260627675513092013-06-04T13:30:03.359+01:002013-06-04T13:30:03.359+01:00Oh, well now - this story will lead to tragedy me ...Oh, well now - this story will lead to tragedy me thinks! Nicely done, Val.Montanagirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428565909247665015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-26519987159445645342013-06-04T11:22:27.966+01:002013-06-04T11:22:27.966+01:00whew! nice tension in this one...and yeah mid stro...whew! nice tension in this one...and yeah mid stroke...someone elses name..that would set me on edge as well...smilesBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com