tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post3555020263858450040..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: THE DRESSValeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-5737117744791819182013-06-14T18:27:49.384+01:002013-06-14T18:27:49.384+01:00Wow Valerie! I was captivated by every word. Amazi...Wow Valerie! I was captivated by every word. Amazing. Love your talent. septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-48944154512963490862013-06-13T11:32:55.797+01:002013-06-13T11:32:55.797+01:00Hi Vesper. Lovely to meet you. How kind of Geraldi...Hi Vesper. Lovely to meet you. How kind of Geraldine to send you over. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this short tale. I must admit I enjoy writing this genre although I never quite know what will happen when I start. <br />Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-5222582780267381812013-06-13T02:52:19.923+01:002013-06-13T02:52:19.923+01:00Hi Valerie,
Geraldine sent me here to read your st...Hi Valerie,<br />Geraldine sent me here to read your story and I'm so glad she did and that I listened to her! :-)<br />Wow! Your story grabbed me from the first lines and wouldn't let me go! Excellent! This is a genre that I enjoy the most and you did very well.Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-57626239577689161542013-06-12T08:22:15.232+01:002013-06-12T08:22:15.232+01:00Hi Geraldine, thank you. You can stop shivering no...Hi Geraldine, thank you. You can stop shivering now... grins.<br /><br />Pat, it's too late to lengthen the story, I've moved on...grins.<br /><br />Hi Herman. I'm curious about the goofy grin. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-46658581680613241152013-06-12T02:51:53.814+01:002013-06-12T02:51:53.814+01:00Excellent story. By the time I finished I had a g...Excellent story. By the time I finished I had a goofy grin on my face. Thoroughly enjoyable! Would have loved to had a longer version to read :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-68810360603460411342013-06-11T23:25:26.931+01:002013-06-11T23:25:26.931+01:00This was great! I agree with Brian and can see thi...This was great! I agree with Brian and can see this being even a longer story. I loved the whole tone of this!Pathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17756564685282866773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-54997518738646946452013-06-11T22:08:59.874+01:002013-06-11T22:08:59.874+01:00Hi Val. Question for you. Is my today's post (...Hi Val. Question for you. Is my today's post (Pheasant photo for 6/11/13) showing up in your Blog Reader List? TexWis said my Blog feed wasn't coming through, until she went in and clicked on my name. Just wondering if it's showing up, since there's been no comments (not that I get a lot of comments), but when none showed up, I began to get a complex. Smiles.Montanagirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428565909247665015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-42374643410984861112013-06-11T21:35:04.408+01:002013-06-11T21:35:04.408+01:00A grand tale Valerie, absolutely loved it!!! I co...A grand tale Valerie, absolutely loved it!!! I couldn't stop reading once I started. DeniseinVAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08494518513936310345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-9251041145987852052013-06-11T19:17:42.040+01:002013-06-11T19:17:42.040+01:00Oh wow, this was quite the story Val. Well done......Oh wow, this was quite the story Val. Well done...shivers....loved this. Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-33287606761459616452013-06-11T16:26:08.946+01:002013-06-11T16:26:08.946+01:00Good afternoon, Ron, and thank you.
'How you ...Good afternoon, Ron, and thank you.<br /><br />'How you do THINK of things like this?'<br /><br />I have no idea. I must have a weird mind...grins. Creative writing is like that; I never know what is going to happen in a story. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-77874339804529092442013-06-11T15:38:38.617+01:002013-06-11T15:38:38.617+01:00Well, that drew me right in! Surely you won't ...Well, that drew me right in! Surely you won't end it there?Montanagirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428565909247665015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-5235724614352783372013-06-11T15:34:36.794+01:002013-06-11T15:34:36.794+01:00*clapping*
Valerie, this story ROCKS!!!!
WOW!
I...*clapping*<br /><br />Valerie, this story ROCKS!!!!<br /><br />WOW!<br /><br />I had no idea where you were going with this story.<br /><br />I kept scrolling down the page; anxious and puzzled as to WHAT was going on with the blood on the dress?!?!<br /><br />How you do THINK of things like this? I am so impressed by your imagination and talent for writing not only romantic-type stories, but Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-28229840836647916342013-06-11T15:25:01.138+01:002013-06-11T15:25:01.138+01:00Brian, sometimes a short story suits me best but I...Brian, sometimes a short story suits me best but I agree this one could have been extended. I need to knuckle down and produce a longer one.<br /><br />Mel, thank you. You you hum a little louder, please. I can't hear you.<br /><br />Hi Pam, I am pleased you enjoyed this tale. <br /><br />Pearl, I'm not sure I could extend this one anymore. One a story is finished it's sort of Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-5880122943313848812013-06-11T15:13:19.971+01:002013-06-11T15:13:19.971+01:00Oh yes I agree with Brian, you could definitely ma...Oh yes I agree with Brian, you could definitely make that longer. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-86088422432338266892013-06-11T13:57:27.838+01:002013-06-11T13:57:27.838+01:00I was mesmerized by this story. It's a real pa...I was mesmerized by this story. It's a real page burner. You definitely have a knack for keeping your readers in suspense. Great job.Pam Beers.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05207051298647053528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-26133603160226504682013-06-11T12:54:24.375+01:002013-06-11T12:54:24.375+01:00k....great piece of writing. So much so--I'm ...k....great piece of writing. So much so--I'm left humming the theme from The Twilight Zone. LOLMelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14408403855260279799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-77970151707634556042013-06-11T11:03:42.003+01:002013-06-11T11:03:42.003+01:00oh dang...you went all stephen king on us....i thi...oh dang...you went all stephen king on us....i think you could really expand this one into something longer and let it play out a bit...there is much more story here....cool val...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com