tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post3781611491267718784..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: A SUMMER CHILL, CHAPTER 24Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-30811367688636423112013-01-30T08:36:15.478+00:002013-01-30T08:36:15.478+00:00Hi Herman. Thank you. Maybe I should spread my des...Hi Herman. Thank you. Maybe I should spread my descriptions more. On second thoughts, maybe not. If it works, best to keep it that way. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-85361872364676064322013-01-30T03:32:16.583+00:002013-01-30T03:32:16.583+00:00"cuddling each other with complete disregard ..."cuddling each other with complete disregard for other people's feelings"<br /><br />How dare they!! Heh...<br /><br />I love the way you subtly detail a scene. I've seen people spend whole paragraphs doing what you manage to do with a simple sentence. Trust me, I'm taking notes for future use! :-)HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-67540217277570520252013-01-29T23:10:47.186+00:002013-01-29T23:10:47.186+00:00Felt like I walked in from the car park myself, an...Felt like I walked in from the car park myself, and ordered a pint myself! The beef and roasted potatoes sounded delicious.Susan Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09834094675218254410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-34138348870136167102013-01-29T17:18:00.161+00:002013-01-29T17:18:00.161+00:00Hi Ron. Had to smile about your beef remark. Have ...Hi Ron. Had to smile about your beef remark. Have you noticed that the field is narrowing? Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-33147033842787146872013-01-29T16:50:13.892+00:002013-01-29T16:50:13.892+00:00As I was reading the part in the pub...
"ope...As I was reading the part in the pub...<br /><br />"opening the door and releasing a remarkable aroma of roasting meat. He found himself hurrying, sniffing the air like a Bisto kid, with an excess of saliva gathering in his mouth."<br /><br />I could actually SMELL that roasting beef, I kid you not!<br /><br />Great chapter, Valerie! And I'm anxious to see what happens, now that Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-75776817346917364042013-01-29T11:50:36.634+00:002013-01-29T11:50:36.634+00:00Good morning, Brian, and thanks. Yes, there's ...Good morning, Brian, and thanks. Yes, there's almost a sign of light, don't you think? Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-6585653078254036322013-01-29T11:29:24.255+00:002013-01-29T11:29:24.255+00:00nice...was enjoying the atmosphere of the pub...ah...nice...was enjoying the atmosphere of the pub...ah glad brian as well has had a bit of insight and hope he gets on with it before something bad happens...nice progression in this one val...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com