tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post541127327738061960..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: A SUMMER CHILL, CHAPTER 5Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-75180098457061371782012-09-19T16:19:15.773+01:002012-09-19T16:19:15.773+01:00I have some catching up to do here. I love your w...I have some catching up to do here. I love your writing Valerie. DeniseinVAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08494518513936310345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-74789181419010131982012-09-19T14:13:15.164+01:002012-09-19T14:13:15.164+01:00"I know what you're doing.." Hmmm......"I know what you're doing.." Hmmm.... you left me hanging!<br /><br />Good job, Valerie. This story should be a movie someday! :)Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11858597624646950763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-85806084447914873682012-09-19T05:06:10.289+01:002012-09-19T05:06:10.289+01:00Ooooh, I have goosebumps! Reminds of that movie: &...Ooooh, I have goosebumps! Reminds of that movie: "I know Who You Are and I saw What You Did" or some such. Frightening! Good work, Val!Montanagirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428565909247665015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-19050912046584108172012-09-18T16:01:41.441+01:002012-09-18T16:01:41.441+01:00Whoopee. Oooh Ron, I'm so pleased to read your...Whoopee. Oooh Ron, I'm so pleased to read your comment. It means that my intention to keep readers guessing is WORKING. I always try to solve a mystery when I'm reading; sometimes I get it right, sometimes I'm wrong, but it's fun to try. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-36094195728508287332012-09-18T15:47:32.960+01:002012-09-18T15:47:32.960+01:00'I know what you're doing,' whispered ...'I know what you're doing,' whispered the voice.<br /><br />Valerie, that gave me chills!<br /><br />As I was reading this chapter, I started to wonder if the caller was male or female; assuming all along it was male. But as you introduced the character of Barbara, I thought, "Hmmm...could it possibly be her?"<br /><br />Great chapter! Love the way you build suspense! Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-84626522737430108932012-09-18T14:44:47.994+01:002012-09-18T14:44:47.994+01:00Thanks, Brian. I hope it's beginning to make s...Thanks, Brian. I hope it's beginning to make sense...lol.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-83617358471396508822012-09-18T11:30:38.397+01:002012-09-18T11:30:38.397+01:00ha i love the subtlety with which you build...the ...ha i love the subtlety with which you build...the young girl promiscuous, the we all need moments of illicit pleasure...and all back to her own caller....hmm....smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com