tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post811449335967326549..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: A SUMMER CHILL, CHAPTER 2Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-18302685312302326032012-08-30T08:04:50.904+01:002012-08-30T08:04:50.904+01:00Thank you, Ranita.Thank you, Ranita.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-15390459881540969682012-08-29T20:29:57.110+01:002012-08-29T20:29:57.110+01:00Waiting for the next episode..this one is a wonder...Waiting for the next episode..this one is a wonderful read..:)Ranita Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13417607648876926648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-615659226229667342012-08-29T08:43:32.279+01:002012-08-29T08:43:32.279+01:00Hi Herman. Thank you, thank you. I appreciate your...Hi Herman. Thank you, thank you. I appreciate your observation. I've just re-read Chapter 1 and agree with you. I think I should have rewritten it, taken things at a slower pace. I was a raw beginner when I wrote it, not that that's any excuse...lol. Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-57762670031480307862012-08-29T04:00:34.942+01:002012-08-29T04:00:34.942+01:00you do bring the characters to life..
another of y...you do bring the characters to life..<br />another of your pleasurable reads...<br />on to chapter 3...fayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15664582851552998721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-77696086602440204112012-08-29T02:59:43.785+01:002012-08-29T02:59:43.785+01:00Call me crazy, but it felt as if this chapter had ...Call me crazy, but it felt as if this chapter had a better, more organic flow to it when compared to last week's. Both are good, but this one read so much better. Very strange...<br /><br />Regardless, beautiful work! Can't wait for the next chapter!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-71770621533396213842012-08-28T16:22:16.043+01:002012-08-28T16:22:16.043+01:00Thanks, Lea. I can't remember if you read the ...Thanks, Lea. I can't remember if you read the first chapter. <br /><br />Mona, I tried to describe the characters to bring them to life.<br /><br />Debuse, I like your choice of words... anticipation is what you should have, right enough.... grins.<br /><br />Brian, oh yes, they're familiar at this stage .. to you, that is.<br /><br />Ron, yes, I had to refer back to make the picture Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-17882090991843573762012-08-28T15:46:33.916+01:002012-08-28T15:46:33.916+01:00I always enjoy how share detailed glimpses into yo...I always enjoy how share detailed glimpses into your character's past because it gives us a clear understanding of the present.<br /><br />Love the scene with the men in the Broadway Pub!<br /><br />Looking forward to your next chapter, Valerie!<br /><br />Have a terrific Tuesday, dear lady!<br /><br />XRonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-78000910079437036462012-08-28T15:02:52.623+01:002012-08-28T15:02:52.623+01:00Another good read Valerie. Looking forward to the...Another good read Valerie. Looking forward to the next with anticipation.DeniseinVAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08494518513936310345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-1316895818360696662012-08-28T13:59:03.933+01:002012-08-28T13:59:03.933+01:00You paint your characters so well!You paint your characters so well!Montanagirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428565909247665015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-386458097203516412012-08-28T11:30:53.223+01:002012-08-28T11:30:53.223+01:00smiles..i love your characters in this...they are ...smiles..i love your characters in this...they are broken and familiar....smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-91933146886756648282012-08-28T08:48:54.127+01:002012-08-28T08:48:54.127+01:00I've enjoyed reading this chapter of your stor...I've enjoyed reading this chapter of your story :-)Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06418411210116683582noreply@blogger.com