tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post8272255176506800371..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: Fear Awaits at Journey's End (repeat)Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-77167182401006372712010-11-30T19:37:54.004+00:002010-11-30T19:37:54.004+00:00I hope not, Joseph.I hope not, Joseph.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-20795131118663805452010-11-30T19:31:34.337+00:002010-11-30T19:31:34.337+00:00Thanks Nina. I'm trying to write a sequel... l...Thanks Nina. I'm trying to write a sequel... let's see if the imagination will stretch that far.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-35896156376278062742010-11-30T15:46:39.754+00:002010-11-30T15:46:39.754+00:00Hello Valerie,
Beautifully written with suspense ...Hello Valerie,<br /><br />Beautifully written with suspense slowly building up and reaching a crescendo. The end leaves me very uneasy because I fear for Leonora.Will Arthur succeed to kill Leonora in the end?<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />JosephJoseph Pulikotilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07074346261093541776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-90621551020442396572010-11-30T15:39:29.271+00:002010-11-30T15:39:29.271+00:00Wow, Val! This was creepy. I couldn't help t...Wow, Val! This was creepy. I couldn't help think as I was glued to your story that this would make a great movie, or at least a Law and Order show! You are a great writer. Your vivid imagination works well for you!Leave a Legacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08736682143653420541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-32031591665681326802010-11-27T20:34:29.344+00:002010-11-27T20:34:29.344+00:00Well done Val. Very creepy.Well done Val. Very creepy.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-88968018145247158552010-11-27T08:09:28.670+00:002010-11-27T08:09:28.670+00:00Thanks to all for your comments. I might take Ron&...Thanks to all for your comments. I might take Ron's suggestion and try a sequel... although I'm not very good at sequels. 'The End' always seems to be 'the end' for me...grins. This story came about because I sat opposite an intriguing looking woman on a train - could see her profile in the window and could't help staring at her rare beauty. God only knows how the Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-62710750197980112312010-11-27T03:56:39.235+00:002010-11-27T03:56:39.235+00:00Wow Valerie,
You are really good, I had never come...Wow Valerie,<br />You are really good, I had never come to this one and I just checked it out because the sub- head line really made me sad - ''Every person has 1000 wishes, a cancer patient only has one: to get better.''<br />I lost my father to cancer recently and miss him, his presence very much..<br />I do not post on my other blog but do write everyday here<br />http://budh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-2053965287670459942010-11-27T02:20:43.001+00:002010-11-27T02:20:43.001+00:00OMG...you did it again, Valerie!
I was riveted to...OMG...you did it again, Valerie!<br /><br />I was riveted to your every word; trying to anticipate what was going to happen next. And then when I got to the ending, I FREAKED!!!!<br /><br />CHILLS!<br /><br />Like Akelamalu shared, I'm worried for Leonora now!!!!<br /><br />OMG, you should write a part two to this one!<br /><br />BRILLIANT, dear lady! Simply brilliant!<br /><br />Your storiesRonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-90095709884439946422010-11-26T15:52:43.862+00:002010-11-26T15:52:43.862+00:00Very scary !Very scary !An English Shepherdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17538962642970952214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-53649034429538774372010-11-26T14:33:49.799+00:002010-11-26T14:33:49.799+00:00I loved the suspense in this story Valerie, it hel...I loved the suspense in this story Valerie, it held me totally!<br /><br />I'm worried for Leonora now though. :(Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-17937748222744189862010-11-26T12:30:32.757+00:002010-11-26T12:30:32.757+00:00iremember this one...very nice...like me some trai...iremember this one...very nice...like me some train stories...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com