tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post4536092974293966937..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: THE LONG WALKValeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-70975005093465746862011-01-14T02:14:47.540+00:002011-01-14T02:14:47.540+00:00Hi ya Val. I am going to admit something terrible ...Hi ya Val. I am going to admit something terrible to you today, and that is I just went straight to the comments page. I will try to get back here and read your story because I know it is awesome but I am about to get mauled by a basset hound and a baby so I have to shut the computer down but I wanted to say hi to everyone before I did. Hi!!!!!Mr. Shifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07061232966394052314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-37203898797683896432011-01-10T22:34:50.686+00:002011-01-10T22:34:50.686+00:00I loved the ending, dearest Val!!!! So suspenseful...I loved the ending, dearest Val!!!! So suspenseful...but happy in the end!!! And that is the very best!!! Just stoppin' in to say "hello," and to let you know I've been thinking of you!! Love you!! ~Janine xoSniffles and Smileshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073156486641622612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-41662555498828349362011-01-09T14:16:36.894+00:002011-01-09T14:16:36.894+00:00Hi Valerie,
Very gripping story.There was suspens...Hi Valerie,<br /><br />Very gripping story.There was suspense in every paragraph.I was glad that it had a happy ending.<br /><br />Many thanks for sharing,<br />JosephJoseph Pulikotilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07074346261093541776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-12136398137745124902011-01-08T19:22:36.025+00:002011-01-08T19:22:36.025+00:00I don't know about weak, but I'm a sucker ...I don't know about weak, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Well done, Val.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-88376624635010922092011-01-08T15:41:32.142+00:002011-01-08T15:41:32.142+00:00been away for a while now and will be back only on...been away for a while now and will be back only on and off for a few more days - no net access :( missed reading your work Valbudh.aaahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-37231910544080928272011-01-08T09:29:32.570+00:002011-01-08T09:29:32.570+00:00Faye, as you know it was the picture that inspired...Faye, as you know it was the picture that inspired me ... an usual feat for me, as Septembermom knows. I'm glad you liked what I put with it! BTW it's not published, only just finished writing it. <br /><br />Kelly, I'm happy that you got some pleasure from this tale. Your comments are so important to me. Thank you. <br /><br />Akelamalu, holding the attention of readers is my Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-41815509063127217182011-01-08T06:19:20.504+00:002011-01-08T06:19:20.504+00:00Sorry so long commenting but I wanted to read both...Sorry so long commenting but I wanted to read both parts first. Another great story my friend, you do have a special gift. I loved this and my emotions ran the gammut. Keep using your gift sweetie, we all get so much enjoyment from it....:-)HugsBerniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03024565921761129108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-23426468700849300812011-01-08T02:04:13.779+00:002011-01-08T02:04:13.779+00:00OMG, Valerie...this was an AWESOME second part to ...OMG, Valerie...this was an AWESOME second part to the first part I read!<br /><br />You had me on the edge of my seat; slowing scrolling down because I was afraid that Arthur Mott was going to JUMP out and grab me - HA!<br /><br />I especially liked how you had Arthur cut "I AM. I, Arthur Mott" on his victim's bedroom door. Oh, how CREEPY!!!!<br /><br />You have SUCH an amazing giftRonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-26229157669299642732011-01-07T18:14:30.367+00:002011-01-07T18:14:30.367+00:00I just read both stories, and enjoyed both! I like...I just read both stories, and enjoyed both! I like the ending too. This story would make a good novel.Lorettahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529068814849612866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-13465374707067399582011-01-07T16:05:39.975+00:002011-01-07T16:05:39.975+00:00I was going to start reading, but then decided I b...I was going to start reading, but then decided I better do as you say and read "Fear Awaits ---" first. So I'll come back to this!Leave a Legacyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08736682143653420541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-20793738904129671612011-01-07T15:20:57.067+00:002011-01-07T15:20:57.067+00:00You kept my attention right to the end Valerie - v...You kept my attention right to the end Valerie - very well written. :)Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-10500912168145229222011-01-07T14:08:44.126+00:002011-01-07T14:08:44.126+00:00My heart is still racing along with Leonora's!...My heart is still racing along with Leonora's! Valerie, I loved this story. The internal angst and passions of each character are very well developed. I'm so glad that you ended it happily. You made Arthur a very menacing figure indeed. Valerie, your writing always blows me away. I get excited about the power of prose when I read your work. Well done once again my friend!!! By the septembermomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01570525910483384484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-65037852136123207612011-01-07T11:40:05.504+00:002011-01-07T11:40:05.504+00:00What a great read... you do have a way with a stor...What a great read... you do have a way with a story.<br />Are these published ??<br /><br />Nice use of the photo... it goes well<br />with the story.fayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07673468419383240363noreply@blogger.com