tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post6792659995067075310..comments2023-12-26T08:30:05.614+00:00Comments on A Mixed Bag: Trust Not The Vow ... Chapter 21Valeriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-10215305554129212612012-03-14T10:50:53.172+00:002012-03-14T10:50:53.172+00:00Hi Ron, the new character has a bigger part to pla...Hi Ron, the new character has a bigger part to play but....Mum's the word!Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-75168399117867364692012-03-14T02:53:19.200+00:002012-03-14T02:53:19.200+00:00Now I am on edge longing for next Tuesday. Well do...Now I am on edge longing for next Tuesday. Well done my friend, xoBerniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03024565921761129108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-36604749937907643762012-03-14T02:05:13.776+00:002012-03-14T02:05:13.776+00:00"Only she had Gary, or part of him, and that ..."Only she had Gary, or part of him, and that was enough for her."<br /><br />Yeah...right! Heh...<br /><br />And right on cue, Gary arrives on scene, no doubt here to gum up the works some more. Great stuff!HermanTurniphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15448138758753193112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-91995241612754968802012-03-13T23:25:21.057+00:002012-03-13T23:25:21.057+00:00Excellent chapter, Valerie!
And it's amazing ...Excellent chapter, Valerie!<br /><br />And it's amazing because I immediately felt a 'shift' in energy to this story with the introduction of new the character, Ralph!<br /><br />Loved your idea of making Cynthia pregnant and Rachel's reaction!<br /><br />Ooooo....and Gary showing up at work?!?! I can't wait to read what that's all about!<br /><br />This story just keeps Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15977027331657615697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-51035996626131016232012-03-13T23:04:44.926+00:002012-03-13T23:04:44.926+00:00I didn't think it was possible to open a bottl...I didn't think it was possible to open a bottle of whisky and not drink from it! :-)john bainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15624118202659480062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-24921397442719123822012-03-13T21:16:55.558+00:002012-03-13T21:16:55.558+00:00I'm still with you on this story. I was shock...I'm still with you on this story. I was shocked that Gary showed up at her workplace....What will happen next?Montanagirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16428565909247665015noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-49245003141004159842012-03-13T14:53:21.450+00:002012-03-13T14:53:21.450+00:00Pearl, for a heavy smoker Cynthia did well
Thank ...Pearl, for a heavy smoker Cynthia did well<br /><br />Thank you, Brian. Realistically we should note how people smell, even though at times we can't talk about it...grins.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12099030819314552958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-47102615144895647742012-03-13T12:20:10.745+00:002012-03-13T12:20:10.745+00:00nice...you handle so many characters very fluently...nice...you handle so many characters very fluently...like the little touches like how they smell...nice chapter valBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8984234400935984998.post-14916908550334651982012-03-13T09:03:33.540+00:002012-03-13T09:03:33.540+00:00Well done to Cynthia! Gary turned up at work?Well done to Cynthia! Gary turned up at work?Akelamaluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11234268568845148285noreply@blogger.com