Almost hidden by a spreading crab-apple
tree she watched as he selected another card from his wallet and inserted it
into the dimly lit cash point. It was a red card, the one he used before was blue.
Two accounts by the look of it. He
withdrew a wad of notes on the blue so it would be interesting to see how much
he got on the red. Eve’s eyes widened when she saw the size of the second
bundle. What she wouldn’t give to have some of that in her collecting box.
The bank was an old establishment one,
built in the 1800’s in what was now a tree-lined esplanade. Elegant, if old
buildings were your thing; and it smelled of money. The area was inhabited by a
wealthy section of society, which is why she was here. If she couldn’t get a
bit of that wealth here she wasn’t the girl she thought she was. Material
things were important but unavailable without cash, that’s why she had two jobs.
Fundraising was her main one, temping for the agency was just a fill-in. Not
for her the impoverishment suffered by her parents and grandparents, or the persistent
complaints that life treated them unfairly. Nor could she adopt her sister’s
lifestyle of living off her friends which was the cause of the rift in their
relationship.
After pocketing the money in his rather
gaudy jacket the young man glanced round before moving away from the
machine. Seeing his face startled Eve,
convincing her that she knew him from somewhere. She racked her brains trying
to remember. Perhaps he frequented her usual coffee bar, or maybe the wine bar
where she and Hazel spent Friday nights? Apart from the weekly visits to the
laundrette she didn’t go anywhere else, only work, and he definitely wasn’t an
employee at March and McDonalds.
Eve switched the collection box to her left
hand to relieve the numbness in her fingers. Colleagues had warned that the
coins would weigh heavy after a while but she thought leather gloves would ease
that. Only she hadn’t realised how difficult it would be handling tiny charity
pins with gloves on. She could call it a day but was eager to win the contest for
the one who collected the most for the city’s deprived children. She didn’t win
many things; she simply wasn’t the competitive type, or hadn’t been until her
sister Flossie announced her engagement to Fred and asked for
support with the wedding arrangements. Now she was all out making those
arrangements, or rather finding the money to pay for it all. The parents
weren’t in a position to fork out willy-nilly for all Flossie’s fancy ideas and
Fred wasn’t much help. According to Flossie he ignored hints like he’d gone
deaf. He was regarded as a well-respected member of the community, albeit a
community at the far end of the land; Scotland, to be precise, which couldn’t be
further away from their family’s Cornish home town. Even so, he didn’t seem to
have much money.
None of the family had known she was
courting, let alone soon to be wed. Their mother naturally came to the
conclusion her daughter was pregnant but the next few months revealed no sign
of ensuing parenthood. Eve could only assume that Florence and Frederick were
truly and simply in love. It was such a pity he didn’t earn enough to pay for
their wedding.
By seven o’clock Eve had had enough. She was
cold and miserable. Her feet throbbed and she longed for a cup of hot coffee
and something warm to eat. Since the workers and shoppers had gone home the
walkway seemed deserted, there was just her to watch the activity of the
shopkeepers shutting their shops. She had thought of waiting for the evening cinema
goers but the bitter cold was making her head ache. Somewhat reluctantly she moved
towards the bus stop, stopping only to adjust the chiffon scarf around her neck
and search for her gloves. In one of her rare moments of self pity she wondered
why she had volunteered to sell charity pins on such a foul day. Eve suddenly
thought about the good-looking guy at the cash machine. And all that money. The
charity would really like that. And the children would benefit.
A bout of shivering decided Eve that enough
was enough. A drink was called for to warm her. The Royal Oak wasn’t far away;
maybe she could pop in for a coffee. All
day opening was in her favour, before that the pubs wouldn’t dream of serving
coffee. She might even get to sell a few more pins.
~~~
More bravely than she felt, Eve walked into
the pub. The warmth hit her, but the smell of ale almost choked her. The place was
packed out with office workers, suited men with ties and high heeled
well-dressed women. She glanced round, looking for a table and quickly
realising the futility of such a thing. Instead she pushed through the crowd,
heading towards the bar, catching her scarf as it slid from her neck.
It was only after bumping into a woman with
a glass in her hand that she noticed the guy at the far end of the bar, the one
she’d seen at the cash machine. He had his back to her but she’d know that
jacket anywhere. It wasn’t everyone who wore such a colourful coat, green
stripes on a yellow base. Eve pushed past a party of noisy drinkers to get a
better view.
The move enabled her to see his reflection
in the long mirror behind the bar. He was very handsome but now she realised
she didn’t know him at all. That could be remedied, she thought, fully
intending to head over to where he was leaning on the bar, nonchalant, like he
hadn’t a care in the world, talking to a skinny jean-clad youth. Eve pushed
closer. She had no idea what she would say to him but, hey, this was a pub...
anything goes in a pub.
‘Yes, miss?’
Although she wasn’t looking in his
direction the barman obviously thought Eve wanted a drink. And why not? After
all she’d come in here with that in mind, though she couldn’t see anyone else
drinking coffee. Without too much hesitation she decided to order a glass of Sauvignon
and waited while a new bottle was opened. It made a lovely sound as the liquid
flowed into a stemmed glass; it quite made her mouth water. It was at that
point she heard a commotion behind her. Glass in hand she turned to look, heard
someone say ‘Well, it must be here somewhere.’
A group of people were searching for
something on the floor. Eve looked down wondering if she would spot anything.
And there it was. It had been kicked under the bar’s foot rail, unseen in the
crush, and only inches away from her right foot.
Taking a quick sip of wine, Eve replaced
the glass on the bar, the movement causing the scarf to slither, as chiffon
does, right off her neck. It shimmered as it landed in a small heap by her left
foot. She bent to retrieve it.
~~~
In the privacy of the ladies cloakroom she
examined the wallet, shiny brown leather, small enough to slip into a
pocket. Without opening it she could see
that it bulged with notes. The boss at the charity base would be pleased to have
so much money for the children, she thought, as she moved towards the door. Or even her sister! But her aim was
not to steal; instead she would use it as an introduction to that exceedingly
handsome young man who need never know how tempted she was!
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Indeed it does. And so does good writing. Well done Valerie...:)
ReplyDeleteah you know...in returning things of such value, the person is usually quite giving so it just might work out the best for all....smiles.
ReplyDeleteWonderful Valerie, another great read!
ReplyDelete"But her aim was not to steal; instead she would use it as an introduction to that exceedingly handsome young man who need never know how tempted she was!"
ReplyDeleteBrilliant finish, Valerie!
Absolutely BRILLIANT!
Well done, dear lady!
Have a fabulous Monday!
X to you and Joe!
I never expected that ending! Your are just so good at what you do, Valerie! Another great read.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Troutbuilder.
ReplyDeleteHa I didn't think of that, Brian.... Smiles.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Denise.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ron. I wrote this in a hurry so I am pleased it turned out okay.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mona. Glad you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteHeh...so glad that she was able to overcome the temptation of simply walking out of the pub with wallet in hand. Heh...great story!!
ReplyDeleteSome temptation, eh, Herman... grins.
ReplyDeleteGood girl! Well....smart girl. LOL Well written, ma'am.
ReplyDeleteI like that it leaves the reader 'the rest of the story' to come up with for themselves.
Well written Val, this kept me wanting to know what would happen next. And more...sequel on the way?
ReplyDeleteHappy Week to You, G
Thanks, Geraldine. I seldom do sequels but you have reminded me that I could post a couple of stories that did have sequels. Thanks for reminding me.
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