She sat at the table next to mine, such a beautiful
specimen of womanhood. Yes even at her ripe age, I guessed at around 75, she
was pleasing to look at. I tried not to stare, I mean, it’s rude to stare, but
since I had never seen anyone like her I couldn’t help it.
Her hair was creamy-white, so pure in colour it made
her skin seem pale. They blended so well I found it difficult to see where the
skin ended and hair began. I know that sounds silly but quite honestly the
effect was outstanding.
Her neck was heavily wrinkled but the graceful way she
held her head made it swanlike. She was elegant. Something I could never be.
***
Abbey wasn’t
normally an eavesdropper but she could hardly miss the powerful description of
an unknown woman from where she sat. Normally she would have a seat to herself
on the 8.10 commuter train but today was Lady’s Day at Ascot so the train was
full. She’d been lucky to get a seat at all.
In view of the recent upset with her mother Abbey found the
conversation disturbing. Oh how she wished she hadn’t answered the phone. Or
put it another way, how she wished the approaching 50th birthday
could be a less traumatic event. If she could see her time over again she
wouldn’t invite her mother to any birthday celebration and then she wouldn’t
have to put up with comments about her hair, her figure, or her outfit. The cocktail
dress had cost the earth and so would the hair do. The first time she’d had it
coloured her mother proclaimed that it was dreadful; a repeat performance prior
to her party would be unbearable! Oh how she wished she hadn’t invited her
mother.
As the train
entered the station Abbey glanced at her watch. She had time to kill before she
needed to head towards the office. Maybe an espresso would calm her nerves.
Bundling together her bag and coat she rose from the long seat at the same time
as the grey haired man who’d sat opposite the whole journey. When the train
lurched to a stop, the man staggered and fell against her, knocking her so hard
her bag slipped to the floor. Both of them tried to save it, knocking heads and
arms as they simultaneously reached out. Immediately Abbey felt some concern
for he didn’t strike her as being very agile. Maybe the walking stick gave the
wrong impression. Somewhat breathlessly, she thanked him and asked if he was
okay.
‘I’m fine lass.’ The man winked and
grinned mischievously. ‘It’s not often I
get thrown into the arms of an attractive young lady.’
Abbey smiled and was about to
contradict him with a self-preserving remark when he put a hand on her arm and
smiled. ‘Allow me to escort you to the escalator,’ he said, ‘then perhaps you
will join me for coffee in that newfangled station cafe.’
A moment’s panic rose inside her,
throwing Abbey completely off guard. She didn’t know this man and here he was
inviting her for coffee. It was only when she sneaked a sideways glance that
she saw him smile, somewhat benevolently, as he took her arm. ‘It’s okay,’ he
said, in a hushed voice, ‘I am perfectly harmless and the cafe will be quite
crowded.’
Abbey grinned as she accepted his
offer, feeling suddenly at ease. Something told her she could trust him. She
hoped her instincts wouldn’t let her down.
They walked
together along the platform towards the escalator. Before stepping on he paused
to take Eve’s arm, a gesture she might have shrugged off had he been a younger
man. It reminded her of her father, how he would always make sure she got on
that first rising step without mishap ... whatever her age. He was a very
protective man and she missed him terribly. Even now.
It wasn’t
until they were seated, with two espressos in front of them, that he told her
his name. Giles Hathaway. Eve thought it so fitted this well mannered
gentleman. He told her he had two daughters and a pilot son, but his wife had died
when the children were teenagers. ‘Matilda was beautiful as well as elegant. She
had it in mind to grow old gracefully; sadly she didn’t get the opportunity.’
Giles smiled, remembering.
‘She sounds a lovely lady.’
‘Oh, she was, m’dear, and you remind me of her. I have seen you on the
train many times and always thought how much you resemble her. The same stylish
way of walking and such apparent grace.’
***
A week
later, the day of the birthday party, Abbey stood in front of her dressing
table mirror and gazed at her reflection. Her new lilac outfit was laid out on
the bed, the silver sandals in a box by its side. She felt good. Since meeting
Giles she felt her life had turned upside down. There was a new twinkle in her
eye, repeatedly remarked upon by workmates.
She decided that no matter what her mother said, 50 wasn’t too bad an
age after all. Thanks to you, Giles Hathaway. For the first time in years she felt
powerful and in control. Picking up a silver-backed hair brush she began gently
to brush her hair. It was always a therapeutic exercise but now she felt quite
rejuvenated and so pleased she had invited Giles to the party. A pity he turned
it down. Such an unwarranted rejection. Again Abbey gazed at her reflection,
lingered once more on the lifeless body that lay sprawled on her bed, the blood
that had oozed from the fatal wound. Mother would have something to say about
this, she thought, if ever she finds
out.
~~~
(Apologies for the weak ending. I didn't have time to play around with it since a new printer was playing up)
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oh my...i rather like the ending...you could play it up a bit but...its got a nice surprise to it....
ReplyDeleteWeak ending?!?! It's an awesome ending, Valerie, and one TOTALLY unexpected. WOW!
ReplyDeleteAnd I also liked the opening (in italics).
Well, done!
Have a super Wednesday!
X to you and Joe!
Oh my gosh - I didn't see that one coming at all! Intriguing read, Valerie.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brian,.I can work on it again when the domestic front is calmer.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ron. I wanted to get something written and posted in order to say I'd achieved something.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mona.
ReplyDeleteAn aged black widow? There's something oddly terrifying about that. Very fun read!
ReplyDeleteLOL... thanks Herman
ReplyDeleteI LIKED THE ENDING TOO VAL! :-)
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