I’m hard done by here and feel the urge to roam
Hard done by you say! Is that what you think?
My Boy! I would say that your life’s in the pink
So what if your Mum and Dad once in a while
Descend heavy handed to cramp your lifestyle
You have a nice home where we live in the park
There’s absence of traffic; you’re safe in the dark
All right! So our house is bereft of a telly
But never of good grub to fill up your belly
You have a soft bed to sleep in at night
Six brothers and sisters to cuddle you tight
So when it gets cold as the winter takes grip
You’ll value these things when you take your long kip
Now I, On the other hand, have good cause to grouse
Raised on the streets of
Where bumper to bumper the traffic ran riot
I swear there was never a time it was quiet
Just crossing the road was a dangerous act
Something my parents found out on impact
I stood on the sidewalk and cried my heart out
Very cold, terrified and too scared to shout
In that instant of time I could tell fate had dealt
All her aces which showed me how loneliness felt
I stayed there for hours not wanting to leave
Unknowing if this was my last chance to grieve
But as the night came; flashing lights lit the place
A gusting cold breeze blew a tear from my face
I perceived it was time to move from
And headed for Broadway to seek solace there
It was while trudging north that I made them my vow
Swore no matter how long or how hard; I’d somehow
Find a safe place to go where a home I could make
That had green open spaces, tall trees and a lake
All through that winter I walked on Broadway
I travelled by night and holed up through the day
It seemed like a lifetime I’d followed this course
Never sleeping a wink; heart full of remorse
Till the day came along when Nirvana was spied
The place I had pledged them to find when they died
With my long search complete; I could start a new life
Settle down, build a home, then find me a wife
With my bare hands I fashioned this mini mock Tudor
So we could live safely, free from intruder
So son! I would say you have no cause to grumble
For having strict parents in a house which is humble
Oh Father I promise I’ll not leave the nest
Your tale has convinced me that home is the best
To move from this place that you sought in such pain
Will never come up as a subject again
For my mind is made up that its here I must stay
A city that never sleeps is no place
For a hedgehog to stray
Sleep tight Dad see you in the spring
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(Please note: I cannot take the credit for this poem, it was written by a friend. However, the picture is one I took outside Central Park)
Poor hedgehog ♥
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed that - your friend is very talented Val. And Central Park in your photo looks like a busy, bustling place (wish I was there). Ah well, I can dream!
ReplyDeleteyou friend did well...and nice pic...always wanted to take a horse and buggy through the park...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful picture sweetie and a most beautifully written prose.
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed the read.
God bless ya and have a terrific Thursday!!!! :o)
Loved it!
ReplyDeleteBRAVA to your friend, Valerie!
ReplyDeleteFANTASTIC poem!
And of course, FANTASTIC photo!
Reminded me of my first horse and buggy ride through Central Park. It was back in the late 70's and it cost $30.00 a half hour. Back than, that was SO expensive. Oh, but so worth it!
Thanks for sharing, dear lady. REALLY enjoyed this post! Have a lovely day!
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Blogaire, it is a bustly place and, like you, I wish I was there.
ReplyDeleteBrian, we didn't take the buggy, more's the pity.
Nezzy, thanks for visiting. Glad you liked the poem.
Peg, I quite liked it too. It was worth posting.
Ron, that was expensive. I wonder what it costs now.
Wonderful. One had to keep on reading it to follow the narative. We went to Central Park in June and I would have been happy to live there.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem and I love the pic. :)
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
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Thanks, Akelamalu, I thought it was time someone read my friend's poem.
ReplyDeletePearl, Hi and welcome.
Ooooh Alan, me too.
I feel real sorrow and concern for hedgehogs.
ReplyDeleteSMART hedgehog!
ReplyDeleteI so wish we had 'em.
Very cute poem with that awesome photo. Well done!!
"So what if your Mum and Dad once in a while
ReplyDeleteDescend heavy handed to cramp your lifestyle"
The older I get the less I get concerned about them cramping my style. After all, I only have one set of parents! :-)
What a delightful poem Valerie! I enjoyed it very much :) Your friend has a wonderful sense of rhythm.
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